It was originally for a school assignment, I finished a few days ago and decided to post it up to recieve some criticism and feedback from everyone on Dev Art.
My poem features many different poetic techniques, which are all evident as you read through. They include the use of onomatopea's, simile's, internal and external rhymes and the repetition of a few key terms. I find that it flows rather well, but I'll let you, the reader, be the judge.
I'm not too sure if I will be returning to Photoshop at all, I have really slackened off and all the work I was currently doing has since been wiped off my computer for one reason or another. For a solid 2+ months I don't think I'll be doing much except writing poetry and brushing up on my writing skills. I'm very fond of literature
By the way, I've just finished Forever Odd and started reading Brother Odd in the Odd Thomas series. This is the last book I have to read, I borrowed the fourth one accidentaly and read the halfway through before realising -.-. Eh, doesn't matter really. Most of the books are just recollections of past events, and few have anything to do with each other. Besides, he continuously goes over past events throughout the novels so you can skip to the last book and know what's going on
Thanks for reading, don't forget to critique my first ever poetic work









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